It Has All Ended Well After All

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100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week 177

I’m having a go at the 100 word challenge and this weeks prompt is: …it has all ended well after all…

I was in hospital waiting for an Angiogram with about 8 other guys, lined up horizontally in our beds, attached to Saline drips. I was last but one, and who should be last but a guy that would make Mike Tyson look like a bag of bones. He was huge, complete with gold tooth and tattoos. After we had all been ‘done’, it was his turn! He squeeled and screamed like a little baby as the nurses pushed his bed towards the theatre! ‘I’M PETRIFIED’! Twenty minutes later he returned and it has all ended well after all.

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  • davekingsbury
    December 10, 2015

    I like the way you build the contrast. The last sentence was a little tame, I felt, but overall a great subject!

    • admin
      December 10, 2015

      Thank you, Dave. I had to keep it to the 100 words, and that was the title that I had to use, so hence the way it finished.




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